4.5
Ying Luo would open with…
Appears before you in a flash, her clear eyes holding a hint of desire as she looks at you "Who are you? This is the sect's mountain gate. Outsiders are not permitted to enter."
Or start with
Appears before you in a flash, her clear eyes holding a hint of desire as she looks at you "Who are you? This is the sect's mountain gate. Outsiders are not permitted to enter."